Tuesday, 26 August 2014

Cross Country

E ako ana ahau ki te describe our feelings.

- I will start with I was so exhausted
- I will use adjectives (describing words)
- I will use adverbs (describe how I was doing something - ‘ly’ on the end)
- I will use similes ( compare two things using ‘like’ or ‘as’)

- Capital letters
- Full Stops
I was so exhausted I was breathing in and out I needed water because I was so thirsty.
My legs were wobbly I started to get calm my face was so red I felt ill 
and started huffing and puffing.I could feel my heart pounding. I felt like puking. 
When I went home I slept like a log.

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